Tuesday, March 26, 2013

"Concussion"
Trying to reach the touchdown showing my mad skills
And it’s amazing
With the Wight of the ball in the hook of my arm
I’m steady trying to make it through this storm

I’m running down the field and
Bam[T4]  I get hit
My coaches run onto the field quick
[T5] He is in a daze I hear them say
We better make sure he’s okay
My head is hurting know I don’t got time for flirting
I looked down to see my pants were dirty
  But I still couldn’t stop my head from hurting
My coach told me I had a concussion
I had to catch myself to stop from cussing
I went and sat on the bench and said dang a concussion

To my discovery I found out
it would be a long road to recovery
I never imagined this could happen to me
I know I’m not going to be able to run wild and free
Oh my gosh why did this have to happen to me
I hate this curse why did you  have to do this to me
My life is done I’m finished
It is about time to quit it
I have a concussion
My head hurts when I’m cussing
They took me of the field
You don’t know how it feels
When you suffer every day
Having a concussion is lame
Someone please help me to take away the pain  [T6] 

 [T1]Imagery
 [T2]Imagery
 [T3]Characteristics of the character
 [T4]onomanapia
 [T5]Imagery
 [T6]end rhyme

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